tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post1280784647119109414..comments2023-05-02T07:17:51.322-07:00Comments on ang writes: Five Sentence Fiction -- WORDSAngela Lynnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-36175762886720983492013-04-07T22:20:59.714-07:002013-04-07T22:20:59.714-07:00Okay. By this point, my face is as red as a strawb...Okay. By this point, my face is as red as a strawberry! So glad you liked it! Thank you!! Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-36151849284924721442013-04-07T22:20:30.621-07:002013-04-07T22:20:30.621-07:00Adding sensory to these small fics is challenging ...Adding sensory to these small fics is challenging and my favorite thing to do. In fact, I always look at these as a way to push myself with using as little words as possible to create a full scene. <br /><br />And gosh, I'm hoping he doesn't die. *sniffles*<br /><br />Thank you so much for reading & commenting! So glad you liked it!Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-69254237262833178542013-04-07T22:19:07.028-07:002013-04-07T22:19:07.028-07:00*blushes*
Thank you!*blushes*<br />Thank you!Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-72332084362119228452013-04-07T22:18:56.857-07:002013-04-07T22:18:56.857-07:00Whelp. Thank YOU for reading and commenting, my fr...Whelp. Thank YOU for reading and commenting, my friend! <br />*high-five*!! Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-71345249367952045862013-04-07T17:12:03.102-07:002013-04-07T17:12:03.102-07:00Oh my. Five sentences was all it needed to convey ...Oh my. Five sentences was all it needed to convey so much emotion? Congrats, that was absolutely brilliant!Marie Nicolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349867233197745366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-73735012816120852342013-04-07T14:45:45.272-07:002013-04-07T14:45:45.272-07:00Love how you used so much sensory imagery in this....Love how you used so much sensory imagery in this. It brought the scene alive even as he lay dying. Very moving. Jayne Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01053366144206401836noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-69326998133578911472013-04-06T19:30:38.476-07:002013-04-06T19:30:38.476-07:00This was beautiful. :)This was beautiful. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-67880422259629366222013-04-06T12:11:29.052-07:002013-04-06T12:11:29.052-07:00Great post says so much in so few words. Great post says so much in so few words. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-12329914202829380532013-04-06T09:46:01.470-07:002013-04-06T09:46:01.470-07:00Add allll the adjectives! ALL OF THEM I SAY!
And t...Add allll the adjectives! ALL OF THEM I SAY!<br />And thank you... *blushes* <br />I'm so glad you liked it.<br />*huggers* <br />Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-66470937467322539022013-04-06T09:44:42.310-07:002013-04-06T09:44:42.310-07:00Nor wished... sometimes you just wish, hope, and p...Nor wished... sometimes you just wish, hope, and pray someone will stay. <br /><br />Powerful is yet another strong word that makes me feel squirrelly and unworthy, but oh so blessed by awesome friends. Thank you. *hugs*Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-18905375436493679282013-04-06T09:43:00.411-07:002013-04-06T09:43:00.411-07:00How about "you're cool beans" and &q...How about "you're cool beans" and "thank you"? <br />*fist bump*Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-77900938685084345512013-04-06T01:36:16.229-07:002013-04-06T01:36:16.229-07:00This is beautiful/sad/heart breaking with gorgeous...This is beautiful/sad/heart breaking with gorgeous, deep emotion. Can I add any more adjectives????? You make it seem rather 'easy peasy lemon squeezy' xxAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09547723072723614894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-12018205068062573632013-04-06T01:35:48.352-07:002013-04-06T01:35:48.352-07:00Lovely, Ang, just lovely. So few words are as evoc...Lovely, Ang, just lovely. So few words are as evocative said by themselves as "stay". Powerful ;))Jo-Anne Tealhttp://www.goingforcoffee.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-10799484814119800442013-04-05T20:05:00.539-07:002013-04-05T20:05:00.539-07:00How about "deep felt emotion" and "...How about "deep felt emotion" and "great imagery"?<br />Scott <br />Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/04/05/five-sentence-fiction-prompt-words/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-53281032432890947752013-04-05T11:36:15.170-07:002013-04-05T11:36:15.170-07:00Exquisite?! For real?! *stunned* That's an mig...Exquisite?! For real?! *stunned* That's an mighty word, and I'm not sure I'm worthy of it, but I'll freaking take it!<br /><br />*HUGS*!!!! Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-47230722301308819702013-04-05T11:35:29.487-07:002013-04-05T11:35:29.487-07:00Is your heart okay?!?!?! *hands you a heart fixer*...Is your heart okay?!?!?! *hands you a heart fixer* <-- don't ask. i don't know.<br /><br />Thank you for commenting! Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-47671956273035118432013-04-05T11:34:39.695-07:002013-04-05T11:34:39.695-07:00That's just about the nicest thing anyone'...That's just about the nicest thing anyone's ever said about one of my stories. And I totally, one hundred percent, understand what you are talking about! Thank you, my friend! *high-five*Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-61770695501518784552013-04-05T10:36:18.735-07:002013-04-05T10:36:18.735-07:00Exquisitely executed! Love it!Exquisitely executed! Love it!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18337746905154922607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-56878516328513613622013-04-04T20:38:23.234-07:002013-04-04T20:38:23.234-07:00Wow. Grabbed my heart fast, I love it.Wow. Grabbed my heart fast, I love it.Catherine Louise Gurganushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15433788944307720397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-1975785902347122592013-04-04T20:37:54.094-07:002013-04-04T20:37:54.094-07:00Wow. Grabbed my heart fast, I love it.Wow. Grabbed my heart fast, I love it.Catherine Louise Gurganushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15433788944307720397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-14078574649459028422013-04-04T20:00:50.849-07:002013-04-04T20:00:50.849-07:00I likes stories that make me want to read them twi...I likes stories that make me want to read them twice to get everything out of them. I read yours three times.<br /><br />Good job!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-75029164153927609342013-04-04T18:09:51.026-07:002013-04-04T18:09:51.026-07:00Awwww shucks! Thank you. *blushes*
And you ain'...Awwww shucks! Thank you. *blushes*<br />And you ain't so shaby yourself! *high-five*<br />But seriously, I'm so glad you liked my wee little story. <br />It *heart* Five Sentence Fiction & it's motley crew! Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-10515404497562884962013-04-04T18:08:07.565-07:002013-04-04T18:08:07.565-07:00Me too. Me too soooo much. *hugs*Me too. Me too soooo much. *hugs*Angela Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08405824955821316661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-11232117872795900202013-04-04T16:21:54.306-07:002013-04-04T16:21:54.306-07:00Firstly I love your site. 2ndly I love your sense ...Firstly I love your site. 2ndly I love your sense of humour and ta daaaaa drum roll I really loved your contribution, you had me gripped from the beginning, hats off to you (if I wore one) :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10020430647050532416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1283354062146755430.post-67403869577085657762013-04-04T14:47:33.353-07:002013-04-04T14:47:33.353-07:00Heart-rending...a moment or two of lucidity amid u...Heart-rending...a moment or two of lucidity amid unconscious fog, I desperately want him to stay! Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.com